Greetings and Happy All Saints Day to everyone. Hopefully they can all guide us to compose better music.
Now that I have figured out how to scan a bunch of pages into a single .pdf file, I have attached the 2nd version to the 1st verse, which is in 1st tone. I'm pretty sure that second last formula from the end does not work with the final formula due to the orthographical error on the word 'love'. After the last posting by Papa-Ephraim, I combed through his Orthography rules to check, so I guess the lesson I should learn is to watch my combinations of formulas from now on so I don't introduce any more errors, even though I'm pulling them out of a book it is possible the selected formulas won't work together. If it is surely wrong (I still haven't heard back for sure yet) then I when I try and type it up all nice, I'll change the ending formula. And any more errors anyone else finds of course.
I have also attached my 1st version to the 2nd verse, also in 1st tone. A little more confident with my 1st attempt at this one.
I skipped the 3rd verse for now because I'm struggling with 2nd tone, haven't finished composing it, and I wanted a local guy here to double check it before I uploaded it.
I have also uploaded the 4th verse in plagal 1st. Don't know if I should have stuck with Ke and Di more, I think I put in more Pa stuff when it was unnecessary.
I'll be out of town for about a week and away from a computer, so pardon me if I don't respond.
Take care and God Bless! Thanks for reading my post!
-Dimitri K.