Praises Doxastikon for July 24th

[GabrielCremeens]

Hello all,

Christ is risen!

Please find attached my composition for the Praises Doxastikon of St. Christina the Great Martyr, celebrated on July 24th, I believe.

Any comments or suggestions would be really helpful. I've provided a couple of alternate theseis - the first for the sake of a somewhat smoother melody, the second for the sake of not putting undue emphasis on an unaccented syllable, and the third for the sake of not repeating a nearly-identical thesi three times in the same piece.

Thank you!

In Christ,
Gabriel

Edit: Put the pages all in one file.

 

[GabrielCremeens]

Here's a typed version, but still awaiting suggestions/corrections. A few changes have been made.

-Gabriel

P.S. There is an error at the bottom of page 2 (last line) - the "3" should be replaced with a "4".

This is in addition to numerous other errors, I'm sure.