January 15 Doxastica

psteele

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Thanks, Michael! Minor comment: on the line that reads "thou slewest the man-slaying dragon", you seem to have missed a hard chromatic modulation on the apostrophos that ends the word, "slewest". The phrase ends with a hard chromatic Ni, but the previous modulation is diatonic.
 
Thank you, psteele.

Here is the corrected version of the Lord I have cried Doxasticon.
 

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